采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;熟练的采用了一些从句;希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查。
Living in the modern sociaty,we will realise a theory that is unwise to make a conclusion after konwing what you hear or what you look. There are numerous examples supporting this arguement.First,it's really superfical beacuse of lack of the changes to find the truth.Second,if we make a concluion immediately,we are confronting the danger of misunderstanding someone or something. Third,this behaviou is harm to us because it hold back we get more things judging from the evidence offered,we might safely draw theconclusion that it's unwise to look or hear something immedely
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