2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦161:濒危动物

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Recently the problem of kill animal has been brought into focus we have so beautiful animal that we need to protect them but a lot of animals has being shotted by someone who desire to earn money and get meat from animal most people seem to think that killed animal whether good or not it is nothing about them they are not aware of it is important thing about to value animal as well as we have a duty to restain some people from shotting animal Therefore we need take measures to reduce possible troubles and avoid damage in future the world compose of human ,plant,animal and something other thing