2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(69)写作:我的朋友李雷

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As we know,safety is the most important thing in our lives.So,we should try our best to make sure we are safe.There are many things we can do.First,don't carry any restricted knives or things with yourself.Second,never have a bath in a river by yourself.Go swimming with your parents,or you maybe lose your life.Third,don't fight with your classmates.You may hurt someone or be hurt by someone.Fourth,pay attention to the traffic rules when you are on the way home.Never go across the street without watching carefully.At last,when you meet some emergency,you should keep calm and call up police or your teacher.Everybody must remember that safety is the most important thing wherever you are.Try be respect to yourself and your parents.