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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3581
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文章组织结构良好;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。

用户练习作文:

The pie chart show us the fast food preferences of teenagers in the United States. It is obvious that Hamburgers and pizza take part in over a half places to be the most populate. hamburgers are far more welcome,taking over 33 percent,than pizza which occupied 26 percent.French Fries are middle prefer of youth for 22 percent. The totally amount of teenager who choose fried chicken, tacos or Sushi are less than who prefer French Fries. It is followed, in order, 9 percent, 7 percent and the least 3 percent young people preference the fast food.

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