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It has been one year since I first stepped into college,I find that it is quite different between college life and middle school life. Firstly,we have more time arrange by ourselves in college.In middle school,we spent the most of time on studying.We have many courses and lots of homework waiting for us to complete.We try our best to study because we all want to go to better universities.We have no spare time to do what we want to do.But it’s totally different in our college life.we are free from heavy classes and homework.We have much time to do our own things. Secondly,we have more freedom in our daily life. For example,in middle school, we always controlled by our parents and teachers.We are not allowed to go out to school except lunch time.But now,we can go out to school as long as we want to do that. Lastly,there is a lot of societies in college for us to enter.we have more opportunities to develop our hobbies. As far as I'm concerned,college life is more colorful and meaningful.
