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行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇量比较丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活,但要避免出现拼写错误。
As can be seen from the picture, a chaffy that eastern and western different cultural element inside on the table.The eastern culture and the Western culture solute in a pot, them communication and mix together。 Culture communication is essential change in the modern that industry develops fast.The culture communicate not only different countries acquaintance each other but also improve friendship each other.If a foreign person invist the China,culture communication gets him a mind cognit about the china to easily understand the china traditional culture. In coclusion,we support the culture communication get the country become strong and prosperity.We should try to help the traditional culture translated more other countries and know different countries culture to enhance ourself knowledge store