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衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇,也能较准确地使用高级词汇。
As can be seen from the picture, a chaffy that eastern and western different cultural element inside on the table.The eastern culture and the Western culture solute in a pot, them communication and mix together。 Culture communication is an essential change in the modern that industry develops fast.The culture communicate not only different countries acquaintance each other but also improve friendship each other.If a foreign person will coming the China,culture communication gets him a mind cognit about the china to easily understand the china traditional culture. In conclusion,we are supported culture communication got the country becoming strong and flourishing.We should try to spread China traditional culture more other countries and know different national culture to enhance ourselves knowledge reserve.