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正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
dear Mr.Wang, Thank you for offering me the job as an editor. It's a great honor and I feel like flattered. To be honest, I don't think I am capable of this job. I used to think the job was easy and well-paid. I was totally wrong. The job requires a person who is responsible,talented and competive,which is beyond my ability. In case that I make horrible mistake, I'd rather quit the job in advance. I'm so sorry that I let you down. I'm sure there will be others who suit the job better. Yours sincerely, Li Ming.
