2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beautiful City in China I am come from China,I have a foreign friends,is Mike. Rencently,he tode me he want go to China and visit to it,and I want take he to my hometown,GuiZhou. GuiZhou was a very beautiful place,it have abandent thing,for example,clean water,beautiful ary and beautiful.GuiZhou’s people was so outgoing,if you do there,them can accept you like them family. Here have a lot of beautiful place,such as GuiYang QianLin mountance,LiBo,XiJiang have many traditional culture,BiJie ZhiJin and so on. GuiZhou's beautiful was so many that I can't list,but I believe if you go here,you must fall in love with it.