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1997年专八英语作文真题:播种 施肥 收获

发布时间:2013-05-18 12:04浏览次数:1389
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Some people hold the view that a student’s success in university study follows the pattern as that of farming, which is characterized by sowing the seeds, nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards’ process. Write an essay of about 300 words on the topic given below to support this view with your own experience as a university student. Sowing the seeds, nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards  
字数:300满分:100分
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可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文中一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活,但请注意单词拼写的检查;文章层次较为清晰。

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It is a common saying that student's success in university study follows the pattern as that of farming which includes sowing the seeds, nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards.For my point of view, it is definitely true. Honestily, doing everything successful in the life all need such a attitude of a diligent farmer. For everyone, there is no short-cut in life to attain success. Many outstanding people who are well-known all pay a lot for their achievements.Success is attainable through unremitting hard work.Like a farmer, you need to wait for sprouting, blowing and maturing.For this saying, I can't agree more. As an english major student, I've tried a lot of methods to improve my english level.It is really a tough treking since it needs patience and persistence.Vacabulary, reading,listening and grammar that are surly difficults for a beginner.When someone choose to go out for dinner,sing in the KTV, I still need to practice my pronunciation alone. For saying goodble to my poor enlish, I need to practice again and again. It pains.But no pains, no gains. Like a diligent farmer, I finally see a little bit hope and achievements.However, the goddess of victory is still waiting for me. Tens of thousands of people endeavor to find the secret of success. However, they may not realize that the only approch to success is working like a farmer who sow the seeds, nurture growth and finally harvest the rewards.

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