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It is a common saying that student's success in university study follows the pattern as that of farming which includes sowing the seeds, nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards.For my point of view, it is definitely true. Honestily, doing everything successful in the life all need such a attitude of a diligent farmer. For everyone, there is no short-cut in life to attain success. Many outstanding people who are well-known all pay a lot for their achievements.Success is attainable through unremitting hard work.Like a farmer, you need to wait for sprouting, blowing and maturing.For this saying, I can't agree more. As an english major student, I've tried a lot of methods to improve my english level.It is really a tough treking since it needs patience and persistence.Vacabulary, reading,listening and grammar that are surly difficults for a beginner.When someone choose to go out for dinner,sing in the KTV, I still need to practice my pronunciation alone. For saying goodble to my poor enlish, I need to practice again and again. It pains.But no pains, no gains. Like a diligent farmer, I finally see a little bit hope and achievements.However, the goddess of victory is still waiting for me. Tens of thousands of people endeavor to find the secret of success. However, they may not realize that the only approch to success is working like a farmer who sow the seeds, nurture growth and finally harvest the rewards.