新目标(Go for it)版初中英语九年级-Uint7 单元测试写作：介绍黄山

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇表达灵活多样，可是高级词汇使用较少。

Since ancient times, "Huangshan guilaibukan Yue, Wu Yue guilaibukan mountain" said. I already know Huangshan insurance, male, show, the United States and are looking forward to the to see the elegance of it. Two years ago, I finally got his wish, and his family go to Huangshan City, Anhui Province famous scenic area of Huangshan Tourism. We from the back of the mountain view, first to watch the museum, then we have a cable car ride heading at the top of the mountain, in the cable car to feel how spectacular, under the cable car is a bottomless cliff, cison rocks, the scenery is very charming, take the cable car on the way, we unconsciously reached the clouds, enter there can only see the cable car down the hill opposite, visibility is very low. Then, we arrived at the cableway station, we enjoy the pleasant scenery of the wonderful world, cison rocks, really is makes one forget to return. 　　云海是黄山第一奇观,黄山自古就有黄海之称.黄山的四绝中,首推的就是云海了,由此可见,云海是装扮这个“人间仙境”的神奇美容师.山以海名,谁曰不奇?奇妙之处,就在似海非海,山峰云雾相幻化,意象万千,想象更是万万千千!!按地理分布,黄山可分为五个海域：莲花峰,天都峰以南为南海,也称前海；玉屏峰的文殊台就是观前海的最佳处,云围雾绕,高低沉浮,“自然彩笔来天地,画出东南四五峰”.狮子峰,始信峰以北为北海,又称后海.狮子峰顶与清凉台,既是观云海的佳处,也是观日出的极好所在.空气环流,瞬息万变,曙日初照,浮光跃金,更是艳丽不可方物.白鹅岭东为东海,于东海门迎风伫立,可一览云海缥缈.丹霞峰,飞来峰西边为西海,理想观赏点乃排云亭,烟霞夕照,神为之移.光明顶前为天海,位于前,后,东,西四海中间,海拔1800米,地势平坦,云雾从足底升起,云天一色,故以“天海”名 The Mount Huangshan board. If the three peak (lotus, day, Guangming Ding), all five sea, can provide an overview of exhaustive. 　　说起黄山“四绝”,排在第一的当是奇松.黄山松奇在什么地方呢?首先是奇在它无比顽强的生命力,你见了不能不称奇.一般说,凡有土的方就能出草木和庄稼,而黄松则是从坚硬的黄岗岩石里长出来的.黄山到处都生长着松树,它们长峰顶,长悬崖峭壁,长在深壑幽谷,郁郁葱葱,生机勃勃.千百年来,它们就是这样从岩石迸裂出来,根儿深深扎进岩石缝里,不怕贫瘠干旱,不怕风雷雨雪,潇潇洒洒,铁骨铮铮.你能说不奇吗?其次是,黄山松还奇在它那特有的天然造型.从总体来说,黄山松的针叶短粗稠密,叶色浓绿,枝干曲生,树冠扁平,显出一种朴实,稳健,雄浑的气势,而每一处松树,每一株松树,在长相,姿容,气韵上,又各各不同,都有一种奇特的美.人们根据它们的不同的形态和神韵,分别给它们起了贴切的自然而又典雅有趣的名字,如迎客松,黑虎松,卧龙松,龙爪松,探海松,团结松等等.它们是黄山奇 Pine stands. These loose is very nice, next, I talk about Guaidan representative, through several lush trees and pine trees, where I was in a far distance day peak, see the "Sea Monkeys", like a monkey saw the stone squatting on the mountain, looking at the clouds we stretch as far as eye can see. Go forward again, is "flying". "Flying" looks like a peach, peach and this is so huge, unusual, so it is also called stone Xiantao. Then, we went to the "pawn". "Pawn" we must have heard, but the real "Fairy" what is the way? In fact, "pawn" is just a big stone hand, forefinger, pointing to the blue sky, and like a PHS stood there, seems to have been abandoned by the gods! We also in Danxia peak to watch the beautiful sea of clouds, but just two points but a bit is not watching the sunrise, the second point is not soak in a hot spring. Mount Huangshan scenery is really impressive, light is a kind of scenery has a unique charm, there is time to play again.