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Since ancient times, "Huangshan guilaibukan Yue, Wu Yue guilaibukan mountain" said. I already know Huangshan insurance, male, show, the United States and are looking forward to the to see the elegance of it. Two years ago, I finally got his wish, and his family go to Huangshan City, Anhui Province famous scenic area of Huangshan Tourism. We from the back of the mountain view, first to watch the museum, then we have a cable car ride heading at the top of the mountain, in the cable car to feel how spectacular, under the cable car is a bottomless cliff, cison rocks, the scenery is very charming, take the cable car on the way, we unconsciously reached the clouds, enter there can only see the cable car down the hill opposite, visibility is very low. Then, we arrived at the cableway station, we enjoy the pleasant scenery of the wonderful world, cison rocks, really is makes one forget to return. 　 Pine stands. These loose is very nice, next, I talk about Guaidan representative, through several lush trees and pine trees, where I was in a far distance day peak, see the "Sea Monkeys", like a monkey saw the stone squatting on the mountain, looking at the clouds we stretch as far as eye can see. Go forward again, is "flying". "Flying" looks like a peach, peach and this is so huge, unusual, so it is also called stone Xiantao. Then, we went to the "pawn". "Pawn" we must have heard, but the real "Fairy" what is the way? In fact, "pawn" is just a big stone hand, forefinger, pointing to the blue sky, and like a PHS stood there, seems to have been abandoned by the gods! We also in Danxia peak to watch the beautiful sea of clouds, but just two points but a bit is not watching the sunrise, the second point is not soak in a hot spring. Mount Huangshan scenery is really impressive, light is a kind of scenery has a unique charm, there is time to play again.