2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。

Nowadays,the computer has become more and more popular with people,and it plays very important roles in people's life,that is what we cannot deny.For example,we always use the computer to do some electric commerce such as buying something without going out and chating with our friends and helping us study and so on.Words have that the computer will replace human beings to some degrees,but I do ont think so.Perple is the most creative species in the world and it is human that awards the computer powerful fundation.People is changing the world by developing the computer technology ,making our world become more and more convienient. But everything has its side effect.as to computer,it is so smart and convienient that people can not even leave it,because we almost do everything online.Gradually we have forgot to thinking on our own and we just rely on technology.In my opinion we should take charge of computer instead charging by it.