题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
Nowadays,the computer has become more and more popular with people,and it plays very important roles in people's life,that is what we cannot deny.For example,we always use the computer to do electric commerce such as buying something without going out and chatting with our friends and helping us study and so on.Words have that the computer will replace human beings to some degrees,but I do not think so.Perple is the most creative species in the world and it is human that awards the computer powerful fundation.People are changing the world by developing the computer technology,making our world become more and more convenient. But everything has its side effect.As to computer,it is so smart and convenient that people can not even leave it,because we almost do everything online.Gradually we have forgotten to think on our own and we just rely on technology.In my opinion we should take charge of computer instead charging by it.