单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;文章层次较为清晰;句式偏短,建议加强复杂句的使用。
Everyone have friends.In school,we well mack many friends.But,just a little well become good friends on we life. I have a good friend.He name is Tom.He is so pretty,so i like him so much.We are play together everyday.We are help each other.Sometimes,we well fight for something. But,this is true friendship. In my life,friends is very important.