小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；复杂句的使用不是很丰富；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

I am LiHua,is president of student union.In October 25,2015,we have“2015 English Dreama Contest”the activity.It's address from the 2nd floor of the lecture hall.We welcome everybody join in activity.The activity is interesting and it can give you are a unforegetable experssion.If you like show that you have power to experssion.That the activity is chance you,believe oneself. We the requirements is take park in the coutest in groups,and fairy tales and original works can be applied.Don't worry you fail,try to challenge yourself.