文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Now we're entering in an information age, and we spend lots of time in searching information.And we have to admit that information makes a great progress for our society. In my opinion, we should make good use the information. For one thing, when you get trouble in your study and try your best to do with, however you can't get it over, you're supposed to look up information something useful online. For another thing, it's significantly convenient for you to find a job after graduation. You can learn more about the companion you apply, so that you can prepare the interview as good as you can. But don't forget it:Don't spend your all day searching the information. You'd better control yourself , tell the information which you really need, be aware off the important of your work.