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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5749[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

Now we're entering in an information age, and we spend lots of time in searching information.And we have to admit that information makes a great progress for our society. In my opinion, we should make good use the information. For one thing, when you get trouble in your study and try your best to do with, however you can't get it over, you're supposed to look up information something useful online. For another thing, it's significantly convenient for you to find a job after graduation. You can learn more about the companion you apply, so that you can prepare the interview as good as you can. But don't forget it:Don't spend your all day searching the information. You'd better control yourself , tell the information which you really need, be aware off the important of your work.

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