2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

文中词汇使用较丰富，高级词汇使用要加强；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误。

As is known to all the same flower has different fate when put in different situations.When there is a protection,the flower blooms beautifully.However,when exposed directly to rain and storm,the flower quickly withers.In the past,my cousin just like protection flower,can’t suffers from rain and storm. As before,because one-child policy is adopted in China,my uncle only has one child.though my cousin have grown up already,they also done everything for him.Not only my cousin did nothing ,but also full of complain with his parents.He just like a little emperor,always wants other people do everything for him.When he went to high school,things changed,nobody help him and prepare everything well for him.Facing the harsh thing he had never face,he become disappointed and frustrated.To my surprise,he only at a loss at the start.He begain to try to complete everything by himself,when he meet trouble he pretend complete by himself not ask others’ help at the first time. Child,need grown up in the rain and storm.let him stay in protection,will make he died earlier and easier.We should not only love then but also teach how live in the world.what they need is not over love,they need the skill how to learn.