高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown used to be a very beautiful place with great trees all around. The river which ran through the town was so clean that you could see fish swimming in groups. On the other hand, the houses were simple and small and people worked around the year just to have a life of no more than poverty. Now great changes have taken place here. You can see tall buildings ,department stores,factories everywhere.Cars and buses are running fast on the broad roads.However,with the development of industry also comes the pollution.Many trees are gone,fish is also disappearing because of the dirty water.Luckily,people have realized the seriousness of the problem and have made great efforts to make our town a beautiful place again.