文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear David: I am glad you'll come to Lanzhou to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful.And many foreigners are learning it now. And welcome advance. I Know you wanted to understand how to study Chinese form your e-mail.I think,at first,you must speak with Chinese friends in Chinese. Second,you need how to write some Chinese words.And the third,you can read some Chinese articles and watch TV or listen radio to practice your listening.It will help improve your Chinese too.You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you.If you have any questions,please ask me. This is some advise for you.I hope it can help you.Good luck to you! Yours, ChenQuan