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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17430
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
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文章层次较为清晰;作者词汇表达较丰富,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化。

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computer change the life of human in all kinds of aspects.we get benefits from it.because of computer we can develop more quickily than the year of last.the quilty of lives be generally prompot .how computer can do that,now I will tell you some thing about that. Firstly,owe to it's ability of saving and sharing information.surfing the internet you can reasch any information you want.Second, it convenients the food and clothing live line of people,iwhen you want to buy some thing,need't go out to pick up and wait for a long line.what's more you can book a train ticket ahead of time,a cheap meals through the internet group purchase.last but not least,just the appearance of internet all golbal people can be contacted.we comunicate with each other by facebook,QQ,ext. in the future,computer may be display by a more advanced,intelligent equipment.at that time it must be a new change for human's life,it value be expected.

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