2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨；用词丰富，高级词汇的积累还有很大提升的空间。

People have created computers many years ago and we have developed the technology constantly. Nowadays computers have helped us do a lot of works. However, there is many problem of using computers. First we are taiking about the good aspects of using computers. Computers reduce people's stress and make our work easier. Also the useful technologies make media pulralistic such as we can cling to a PPT or Flash to impress listeners. And the most important is that computers help us to do some intircately detailed count while scientists work out a large count. Secondly in sometimes we are hunted by our helpful friends. Many people appear some problems about eyes. Watering or dry eyes, cannot see things clearly and so on which are affect our daily life. More and more day we use computer, more and more our brain degenerate. As many as adults and children are addicted to Internet games which makes them spend all money to play. In some family whose children are not stay at home frequently, old parents want to watch their children but they don't know how to use computers. So, in our daily life, we should use computers in indeed time and don't play it for too much times.