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假如你叫Han Mei,你的笔友Mary邀请你去参加聚会。请你用英语写一封信给Mary。
3、谢谢她寄来的漂亮的明信片, 你很喜欢，将它放在书桌上。
简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear Mary， Thank you very much for inviting me to your party.I am very sorry.I Can't attend your party.My mother is ill,and I have to take care of my mother in the hospital.Doctor said she has a bad cold,so she must stay in the bed for a few days. Thank you very much for sending me so beautiful postcard.But I am so sorry. Your postcard is so beautiful I love it very much.And I am going to put it on my desk. What a pity. I hope you will be happy in your party. Could I hear from you soon? Give my best wishes to your family.
