复杂句使用不错,句法规范;全文结构较为严谨;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。
Welcome to my hometown, and please let me as a tour guide to share the most of impression places. As most of beautiful places in Hennan province, it's a sign to Chinese kungfu with a great influence at Shaolinsi.People who live there usually have learned unbelievable kungfu and both physical and virtue increse to hign sutiation where normal one can hardly reach to.