Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者在高级词汇方面要多下功夫,有些单词拼错了。
In a increasingly popular using of internet, more and more people tend to communicate by computer instead of face to face. Communication whatever the way you want can be easyly found based on app,no matter how long distance you may be away from others. Of course,A pratical characteristic why it rates so quickly recent years is that it helps us save for much money from mobilephone with using messages touching with others.Just a little flux,which is usually served on internet, you can accomplish most of things such as email,message or vedio chat etc,associating with others. Although lots of benifits we have known,there have some important reasons for its irreplaceable .Face to face give us more ture feelings over than internet commucation,which ignore the distance each other.This feeling can't be replaced by anything ,because the mean will be unique.