2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

In the former cartoon,many people who are tenacious watch the screen.At the same time,they are all in the net that individe part and relate each other.The internet intensive relate each other,but separate people and let the heart further on the same time. Admittedlly,the internet let person communication become increasingly,but they are chatting with our friends even wichout face to face.To be exact,we spond hours online communicate with other ,but not go out the hose to shopping with friends. overall,we young people should reasonably treat online,take more time with firends together do some healthy exercises.Enjoy the life and limit time.