2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；从句数量偏少；文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些高级词汇。

In the former cartoon,many people who are tenacious watch the screen.At the same time,they are all in the net that individual part and relate to each other.The internet intensive relate to each other,but separate people and let the heart further on the same time. Admittedly,the internet let personal communication become increasingly,but they are chatting with our friends even without face to face.To be exact,we spend hours online communication with other,but not go out the house to shop with friends. Overall,we young people should reasonably treat online,take more time with friends together take some exercises healthy.Enjoy the life and limit time.