2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；从句数量偏少；文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用高级词汇。

In the former cartoon,many people who are tenacious watch the screen.At the same time,they are all in the net that individual part and contact to each other.The internet intensive contact to each other,but separate people and take the heart further on the same time. Admittedly,the internet let personal communication become increasingly,but they are chatting with our friends even without face to face.To be exact,we spend hours online communication with other,but not go out the house to shop with friends. Overall,we young people should reasonably treat online,take more time with friends together take some exercises healthy.Enjoy the life and limit time.