2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒。

In the former cartoon, many people who are tenacious watch the screen.At the same time, they are all in the net that individual part and contact to each other.Internet intensive contact to each other, but separate people and take the heart further on the same time. Admittedly, the internet let personal communication become increasingly,but they are chatting with our friends even without face to face.To be exact,we spend hours online communication with other,but not go out the house to shop with friends. Overall,we young people should reasonably treat online,take more time with friends together take some exercises healthy.Enjoy the life and limit time.For our adolescence needs the encouragement and inspiration in our friendship.