2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下。

In the former cartoon, many people who are tenacious watch the screen.At the same time, they are all in the net that individual part and contact with each other.Internet intensive contact with each other, but separate people and take the heart further on the same time. Admittedly, the internet let personal communication become increasingly,but we are chatting with our friends even without face to face.To be exact,we spend hours online communication with other,but not go out the housewith friends to shopping. Overall,we young people should reasonably treat online,take more time with friends together take some exercises healthy.Enjoy the life and limit time.For our adolescence needs the encouragement and inspiration in our friendship.