2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

如若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累。

In the former cartoon, many people who are stare at the screen.At the same time, they are part of the net that individual part and contact with each other.Internet intensive contact with each other, but separate people and take the heart further on the same time. Admittedly, the internet let personal communication become increasingly,but we are chatting with our friends even without face to face.To be exact,we spend hours online communication with other,but not go out the house with friends to shopping. Overall,we young people should reasonably treat online,take more time with friends together take some exercises healthy.Enjoy the life and limit time.For our adolescence or other age groups need the encouragement and inspiration in our friendship.