拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
I like to see the movie is very much.Because movie can catch my eyes so easily, I will be immerged into the story soon, unlike the books, which abound in words, make me get bored easily. One of the movie’s functions is to catch people’s attention fast, as the movie is interesting and people can see what is going on clearly. Most important function of movie is to show people the culture. We can see all kinds of the countries’ culture from the movies, a good movie reflects the director’s opinion about the world or the value. I Like the American movie, individual heroism is everywhere, in reality, American people indeed praise individual heroism and they chase for individuality. In the Indian movie, we can see there are a lot of poor people and the women’s situation is not that good. Movie is a good way for people to learn things。