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恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；从句使用量稍显不足；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视。
The Importance of extracurricular activities In many chinese universities,they often pay less attention to the extracurricular activities.there very little place for students to hold some extracurricular activities,which they are really interested in.What is more,these activities can help us make more friends and wide our horizons.I my opinion,as a modern college,we should not only study but also play,of courise,the play which I say is different from the common play.My play is healthy and can improve our abilities in every aspcets. Therefore, schools should build more places that we can use our imagination to creative more.
