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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17578
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分50.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

We know we decide to do something through our deep thinking because we can't relay on snap judgements. But why is it like this? here are my ideas. Frist of all, we need enough time to think ,to analyze,and to make a decision,and we won't detail the essention if we make judgements so soon. Just like my experence in high school,i was regarded as an genious bacause i can finish exams with only half of the time limited,but i know in my heart that the speed is based on more wrongs.You can't both do it well and do quilitly.Secondly,snap judgements will led us into a endless way with ghosts waiting there, and we can't come back once we make it.

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