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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者用词生动多样，高级词汇使用比较准确，但有少数拼写错误。
As far as i'am concerned,we are all college students who do not have access to incomes,so it is our duty to save money or use money economically because what we own now are all given by our parents.But it is quite true that saving money on everything sounds like not very wise.We do need to assess what type of stuff is acceptable to choose the cheap one and the stuff need be in good qulity.we should learn to choose wisely and be a smart consumer. In our daily life, there are many different kinds of money-using.Some of them are not actually necessary and the others should compulsorily be qulified. There is a case in point that a college student who major in information technology are required of a high-qulity computer when he is handling his projects , while an artistic student are not,maybe she or he would just buy a second-hand computer even do not use one at all . So the earlier one have to pay more money on his equipment than students in other majors.But this kind of investment is unevitable,we must take more serious attitude towards it. All in all,what we should do in college is not only learning new ways of life and acquiring knowledge but also learn to manage our money and make our own financial dicisions.
