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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
文章词汇使用比较恰当，学术词汇积累不足；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章层次较为清晰。
today, more and more people living in the large cities. However, the quality of those people who live in big city is low-down. In my opinion, the decreasing of people's life can be caused by the object below.first of all. the air pollution .This is the most serious problem in almost 80 percent city in the developing countries. Factories drop out the water what was just used for mechanical produce .It may cause many kinds of desease like heart desease.Second ,on ourselves, we do not take good care of our body, so there's kinds of problems on our body.last ,more and more stressful working we done.that makes our body worse and worse. to solve this problem, there's two main way we could take.we need to care of our body every day ,drink more water and don't eat or drink cold things.on the other hand ,we need to learn to relax our body.sometimes we work too hard to do the things we like. the most important is to relax ,remember that you're not single in this world.
