采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;能够使用一些不错的从句;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
Since ancient time,there were a saying that :Seeing is Believing.people always came into a decision based on what they heared or saw.But is it always true? obviously not. In shakespeare's most masterpieces,just take for example, Othello was a good man and he was kind to others, but he has his own tragic flaw, he was too jealous and always chosed to believe what he saw or heared. One day, he heared that his wife had affair with a man,then he rushed into a conclusion that he was betrayed by his beatiful wife, Instead of believing his wife,he killed the innocent lady wrongly.So the tragic happened irresitably. If Othello hadn't believed what he heared or saw easily,the tragic could have been avoilded.So it is fairly unwise to get a conclsion so easily just depend on what you see or what you hear.
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