题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多。
on maintaining trust A famous saying goes like this' it takes years to bulid trust, and a few seconds to destroy it!' This saying reveals the truth about the difficulty in maintaining trust that it only takes one dishonest action to destory the hard-bulit trust. It is universally acknoeledged that trust is essential to the prosperity of any society, and people need an environment of mutual trust to live a happy life. Therefore, i believe that two things are extremely important to maintain trust in our life and society. First and foremost, since trust is build on honesty, honesty behaviour mast be practised at all time. Consistency is of vital importance here, because no matter how honest you have been in the past, trust can always be ruined bu just one time of dishonest hehaviour. The second one ,which i believe is even more important, is that people should have a strong belief that in honesty and a collective effort to create an honest and trustworthy environment. All in all, trust is what ereryone wangs in life. Therefour, it is worth a great deal of effort to bulid and maintain trust in our society.