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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6292
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者在句法层面做的很棒;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

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On Maintaining Trust A famous saying goes like this' it takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it!' This saying reveals the truth about the difficulty in maintaining trust that it only takes one dishonest action to destroy the hard-built trust. It is universally acknowledged that trust is essential to the prosperity of any society, and people need an environment of mutual trust to make a happy life. Therefore, I believe that two things are extremely important to maintain trust in our life and society. First and foremost, since trust is build on honesty, honesty behavior must be practised at all time. Consistency is of vital importance here, because no matter how honest you have been in the past, trust can always be ruined by just one time of dishonest behavior. The second one, which is even more important, is that people should have a strong sense of self-discipline to resist all kinds of temptation that will contribute to dishonest behavior. This calls for a strong belief that in honesty and a collective effort to create an honest and trustworthy environment. All in all, trust is what everyone wants in life. Therefore, it is worth a great deal of effort to build and maintain trust in our society.

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