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Nowadays, the advertisements can be seen everywhere.And of course,it plays an important role in our daily life. It brings us many benefits, so in my opinion, the advertisements have many advantages because of its convenience. Firstly,it saves out time.In the modern society,more and more people like buying goods without going out,the advertisements give us opportunities to know different products on television at home.Secondly,it saves money.There are many products in same type, you can compare it,then choose the best and cheapest one.Thirdly,it saves our health.When you watch TV too long, it would hurt your eyes, the advertisements could save us by suspending the programs or teleplays. In general,the advertisements are good for our life,not only in the mind ,but also in the health. I think the advertising industry will develop fast and have bigger improvements.And what i really believe is that everything existed in our society must have its valuable aspects, just like the advertisements.
