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The Best Way To Stay Health With the development of our society,we lived more comfortable and convenient.we eat many kinds of meat,the frid food,which are all harmful to our health.Therefore,in my opinion,I think the best way to stay health is to control our diet and keep the balance as far as possible. Fristly,we should eat more vegetables and fruits,but not fried foods.Only in this way can we have a healthy body.On the morning,we should eat an egg and drink some milk,which can strength our body.And on the afternoon,we can eat one bowl of rice and various vegetables,if you want to eat meat,once a week is the best and after the meal you can eat some fruits an hour later.on the supper you should eat less and eat before the seven o'clock and after the supper you can go for a walk. Secondly,make meals yourself as long as you have time,do not go out for a meal because you don't know wheather their foods are clean or not. Finally,you had better eat regularly and don't because of the work to forget to eating .please remember that health is the important thing in our life.
