托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；文中拼写错误有点多了。

As for the question raised above, I hold the positive opinion that we need to study all the time untill we pass away. To be honest, we all wanna stay free if we can, that why some people support the opposite idea, but I can't say more whether it's right or not bacause it obvious. So some may wantna ask why should one learn all the time,here are some reasons. The most importent of all is we need to renew our knowlege to adapt the age's need, as time floating, knowlege is updating, what we learned before has been taken over by the new. Secondly, it doesn't matter whether you are old or not just if you are alive because the pursuits in our heart are the same. I once saw my grandpa put his books down untill he closed his eyes. Concidering all above, I think 'one should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older' is absolute right.