托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足。

As for the question raised above, I hold the positive opinion that we need to study all the time until we pass away. To be honest, we all wanna stay free if we can, that is why some people support the opposite idea, but I can't say more whether it's right or not because it obvious. So some may wanna ask why should one learn all the time,here are some reasons. The most importort of all is we need to renew our knowledge to adapt the age's need, as time floating, knowledge is updating, what we learned before has been taken over by the new. Secondly, it doesn't matter whether you are old or not just if you are alive because the pursuits in our hearts are the same. I once saw my grandpa put his books down until he closed his eyes. Considering all above, I think 'one should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older' is absolute right.