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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3528
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
评语:

作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多。

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We know we decide to do something through our deep thinking because we can't relay on snapping judgments. But why is it like this? Here are my ideas. First of all, we need enough time to think, to analyze, and to make a decision, and we won't detail the essence if we make judgments so soon. Just like my experience in high school, I was regarded as a genius because I can finish exams with only half of the time limited, but I know in my heart that the speed is based on more wrongs. You can't both do it well and do quickly. Secondly, snapping judgments will led us into an endless way with ghosts waiting there, and we can't come back once we make it.

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