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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71619
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量;全文结构较为严谨。

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I was born in Xi'an the Shannxi province. And there are lots of resorts here. Such as City Wall, Bell Tower, Big Wild Goose Pagoda, Shaanxi History Museum, Tang Paradise, Famen Temple, Tang Dynasty Music and Dance Show, As for the best ones, the following come highly recommended:Tang Dynasty Palace. Situated near the city center of Xi'an, the Tang Dynasty Palace boasts that it is China's premier cultural entertainment theatre restaurant. Established in 1988, the Tang Dynasty Palace has cooperated with the Shaanxi Provincial Song

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