2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far. These social phenomenon show that packaging is popular with among of people.Why it is appear? First,the society has developed quickly in material thing.The most of merchants are coming with all kinds of ideas to attract the customer.With precisingly competing with the business in file,and then the culture was hit in the foreign culture.The thought that is crazy is carried out the articles for daily use to express the fresh view.The third,during the festival,sending a present give your superior and your elders that is a tradition,The merchants make good use of the mentality in culture and make it get mainstream in festival. I reckon that the packaging is a good thing,but the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and destroy the environment.