2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉。

The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far. These social phenomenons show that packaging is popular with among of people.Why it appears on? First,the society has developed quickly in material thing.The most of merchants are coming with all kinds of ideas to attract the customer.With pierce competing with the business in files,and then the culture was hit in the foreign culture.The thought that is crazy is carried out the articles for daily use to express the fresh view.The third,during the festival,sending a present given your superior and your elders that are a tradition,the merchants make good use of cultural psychology and make it get mainstream in festival. I reckon that the packaging is a good thing,but the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and destroy the environment.