2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；文中用词稍显贫乏；请注意分段。

As far as we know,computer that the day was invented to the present is only several decades,surprisingly, and it has been made use of in a wide rang of the workplace,in addition to its fast calculation and convenience operation,computer has widely spread into and extremely influence people’s daily life.Then, people became aware of the side effects of excessive use of the computer.