拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Dear Editor, I am a faithful reader of your newspaper and I am writing this letter for the purpose of conveying my deepest concern about "White Pollution". It must be pointed out that the current situation is going from bad to worse.Consequently,it is urgent for us to take even more drastic measures.In the first place,we should appeal to the authorities concerned to set up stricter regulations against this pollution.In the second place,we must raise the public's awareness of its gravity,which is of vital importance to the solution.In the third place,the scientists concerned should help devise ways of alleviating the worsening trend. Thanks a lot for your due attention to this letter.I am looking forward to some new changes in our society. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei