作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far. These social phenomenons show that packaging is popular with among of people.Why it appears on? First,the society has developed quickly in material thing.The most of merchants are coming with all kinds of ideas to attract the customer.With pierce competing with the business in files,and then the culture was hit in the foreign culture.The thought that is crazy is carried out the articles for daily use to express the fresh view.The third,during the festival,sending a present given your superior and your elders that are a tradition,the merchants make good use of cultural psychology and make it get mainstream in festival. I reckon that the packaging is a good thing,but the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and destroy the environment.In aspects,it appears the comparison of phenomenon in society as a fashion,then the vast majority of the people are normal citizens getting on with their lives.the condition of people's life get harder and harder.so we should that